Intro to My New Life

My first portfolio piece is "My New Life," I wrote this the second week of class. I have picked this because it was so fresh in my mind.  This really was about the first day of class, only two weeks before.  I think the strongest part of my piece is when I am describing how I am feeling such as "I started sweating my forehead looked like Niagra Falls all of the sudden I couldn't hear anything but the thumping of my heart."